Chapaat v2.0

Monday, January 16, 2006

Sazaa

Hey doston, jo tum mazaak udaa rahe they, to lo iski original kahaani sun lo, Lion form mein. (lion = sher anpad!)

Chapaat jo mera naam pada hai, haye is duniya mein zulum bada hai,
zaalimo kee jo fauj khadi hai, chai peeyoge ? thand badi hai.

Ek din kee tum baat sunoji, Din nahi thaa raat thee wo ji,
Lions ka ab mood hua hai, Lo suno fir , arz kiya hai.

Lion jo pasand na aaye, to mera to kuch naa jaaye,
mainay konsaa karz liya hai ? par lo sun lo, arz kiya hai.

Chapaat tha koi ek bechaara, tha woh to wella no. one,
wella hota to to theek, par tha woh hee akela no. one.

Ek chapaati kee khoj mein, ghoomta tha woh,
galeeyon mein, bazaar mein, kaha kaha na dhoondhta tha woh.

Chapaati ke bin, uska jeeven, bada, feekaa sa tha,
Kya kahu, jaise bin make-up kee, rekhaa sa thaa.

Jaise bin shakkar kay sharbat saa thaa,
Jaise bin barfo kay parbat saa thaa.

Fir jab ek chapaati ne, jeevan mein uske kadam rakkha,
duniya badal gayi thee uski, aisa usko laga dhakka.

Chapaat usse chahta thaa bahut, par himmat naa jutaa paya,
love story kee starting huvi tab, jab chapaati ko bhi chapaat bhaaya.

Chapaati ne aakar chapaat ko, apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya,
chapaat kaa mooh to khulaa nahi, is khushi ne aisa uspe, vaar kar diya.

Chapaat kaa jo jeevan thaa, woh pyaar rang se bhar gaya,
zaraa dekho bhai logo, yeh chota sa ILU, kya kya kar gaya.

Ab dekho kaise usko, chapaati, yaaro mil gayee,
Aisa huva, jaise devdas ko uski paaro mil gayee.

Sote jaagte chapaati aur chapaati hee yaad aati thee,
chapaati ke rangeen yaad, uske dil mein rang bhar jaati thee.

Chapaat thaa gareeb saa, par ladka thaa mehnatee aur sincere,
lekin chapaati se to sacha pyaar, tha kiya usne dear.

Mehnat se khoon paseena ek kar ke, usne kaafi money jamaa kiya,
'Chapaati' restaurant start kar ke, aur bhi kaafi money kamaa liya.

Chapaati kee to neeyat ab, bigad see gayee,
dhoke se sign kara kar woh, nikal hee gayee.

Chapaat ne to pyaar kiya tha, chapaati ab bhi thee use pyaari,
chapaati ko ek shabd na bola, sop dee amaanat saari kee saari.

Chapaat ab aaya road pe, toote dil ke saath,
na chapaati na tha paise, bache bas do haath.

Chapaat jee ne haar na maanee, mehnat mazdoori se rozi kamaayee apni,
kudrat ka bhi khel to dekho, chapaati ko bhool dikh aayee apni.

Maafi woh kis mooh se maange, sharam kee maare mar rahee thee,
par maafi kee use zaroorat na thi, chapaat se kyu woh darr rahee thee ?

Sharam aur is darr ke maare, chapaati ne apna haath tha kaata,
Paisa mila par bin chapaati, yeh bechaare chapaat kee gaathaa.

Dukhti rago par haath jo rakha, to is chapaat ko yaad woh aayee,
Chapaati ko koi kuch na kehna, abhi bhi is heart ko yaad woh aayee.

18 Comments:

  • Ai mere watan ke logon, zara aankh mein bhar lo paani,
    Na suni thee na sunoge, aise dard bharee kahani.
    Khata hui bohot badi, jo last comments mein mazaak banaayaa,
    Maaf kar de mujhe mere dost, mein tere dil ki haalat samajh na paya.

    Chapaati tujhe wapas mil jaye, bas meri yehi dua hai,
    Mein samajhta hoon dost, mohabbat mein dokha mujhe bhee hua hai.

    :(

    By Blogger vibhav, at January 16, 2006 9:18 AM  

  • chapaat-"chapaati re!!!tere bina bhi kya jeena..hoo hoo tere bina bhi kya jeena!!":-p
    This ones 4 u chapaat,ARZ KIYA HAI,...
    "begair jaane pehchaane ikraar na kijiye,
    muskurakar dil ko bekarar na kijiye,
    gulaab bhi de jaate hain zakhm gehre kabhi,
    har gulab par yu aitbar na kijiye!!!"
    Story ne to rulaa hi diya!!!May god give u another chapaati very soon!!!-Ms.Happening!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at January 16, 2006 9:41 AM  

  • Awww.....*wipes her unshed tears*

    Padhkar itni dukh bari dastan, hui hain meri aankhen num
    Tumse maangne ke liye maafi, pad gaye hain shabd kam
    Oh your royal highness Chapaat, sun lo meri fariyaad
    Kabhi na sataayenge tumhen hum aaj ke baad
    Dil-o-jaan se dua yehi nikalti jaaye
    May you get a new Chapaati, as gorgeous as Aishwarys Rai

    AMEN!



    Pssst: I was temporarily out of my mind when I wrote that. :P

    By Blogger The Girl Who Sold The World, at January 16, 2006 2:51 PM  

  • Had forgotten to blink my eyes...

    *Blinks her eyes and flies off*

    By Blogger The Girl Who Sold The World, at January 16, 2006 2:52 PM  

  • putra..i can neva ritw poetry..:( but u have talent!!!!!!!
    i can understand ur feelings*snif snif* isislye i say beta, zamana wadda kharab hai...
    *deep sigh! *

    By Blogger R, at January 16, 2006 7:46 PM  

  • yeh tha chapaati ka bad luck,jo chapaat ke pyar ko samajh nahi paayi,
    hats off to kismat ka khel,wo bhi kahan chain se jee paayi.
    Is chhoti si lov story ne,heer raanjha ka record toda,
    hum zaalim duniyawaalon ne bhi tera dil baar baar todaa.
    Maaf humein bhi karna plz,hum bhi hain tumhaare gunhegaar,
    samajh naa paaye uske liye tera 100.098766%(approx.)pyaar!
    Bhagwaan tujhe de sohni kudi,yeh hai hamaara aasheerwaad,
    jo samjhe tere approx. pyar ko,aur kar de tera jeevan khushiyon se aabad.
    Ab jo hua so hua,beeti baatein bhool jaao,
    pehli ke liye restaurant banaaya,doosri ke liye hotel ka plan banaao!!

    *rest could not b written as i was crying badly:((*!!-Ms.Happening!!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at January 17, 2006 12:46 AM  

  • haaye kya dukh bhari kahani hai
    yeh pyaar to maujon ki rawani hai
    har kisiko is mein tairna nahi aata
    beta main aur kya comment doon samajh nahi aata

    lol what a pathetic attempt at poetry! but plz no chapaats ok; it was a honest attempt!
    waise u got talent re!

    By Blogger t, at January 17, 2006 2:31 AM  

  • @the anon
    shukriya hai tujhe dost,
    you understand me the most!

    @Ms Happening
    waah waah kya sher likh daala,
    mera jeevan roshan kar diya, jo tha kaala!

    @Anushka
    hahahah
    mogre ka fool
    hahah
    nice nice
    thanks for u wishes...
    hehe

    @the girl who did pata nahi kya kya
    maafi to granted hee thee yaar..
    par waise mujhe ab nayi chapaati nahi chaheye...
    thanks
    but good lion there....

    @ruchi
    hhah poetry to koi bhi likh sakta hai
    bas mood kee baat hoti hai...
    correct mood ho to lines khud aati hain without much effort. :)
    i no zamana kharaab hai lekin aap to maatey, kharab nahi ho na!! :)
    *deeper sigh*

    @Ms Happening
    lagta hai tu kuch zyada hee affect ho gayi hai!
    aur mere decimals ka mazaak udaana chhor do... uske peche bhi ek dukhbhari kahani hai!
    sunegi to teri aakhon mein aasoon aa jayenge!
    but yaar! teri poyum mast hai! sachi!
    im tellin u blog khol le....

    @trupsster
    haha koi nahi koi nahi well tried hai..
    and shukriya hai aapko :D

    By Blogger Kaala Kavva, at January 17, 2006 8:50 AM  

  • @vikram
    arre aisa kuch khaas nahi hai yaar... im sure kisi ko ab kuch kehna nahi padega.. sayesha ko bhi.. woh bhi yeh post pad kar samajh jayegi

    By Blogger Kaala Kavva, at January 17, 2006 7:41 PM  

  • LOL. Blog bhi kamaal n the comments too .. hilarious.
    Tum to bade mahaan kavi nikle mani ..
    Kavi mani ko shat shat pranam!

    By Blogger aria, at January 18, 2006 5:21 AM  

  • bahut achhe.... bhagwaan kare tujhe jaldi hi doosri chappat mile...:)

    By Blogger amit, at January 19, 2006 7:59 AM  

  • @aria
    haha
    shat shat shukriya aria ko

    @amit
    ab kya karunga.. nahi chaheye mujhe koi chapaati

    By Blogger Kaala Kavva, at January 19, 2006 8:39 AM  

  • 1.432687(approx) baat kahein?

    Wah Chapaat wah! Kya likh dala re! Kya dastan hai... 2.3456(approx) ankhon mein aansu aa gaye!

    ps: Oye Vikram, what do you mean by 'especially Sayesha'? Huh huh huh?

    By Blogger Sayesha, at January 19, 2006 7:35 PM  

  • @cs
    hahahah
    ahahahahhahahaa
    ahhahahaha
    a

    jai jharkhand! hahahah
    ahahahaha

    '1.432687(approx) baat kahein' !!!
    hahahah
    tum kitne log mil ke keh rahe they ???

    hahahaa

    By Blogger Kaala Kavva, at January 19, 2006 8:09 PM  

  • Hum toh hum hi hain. 1.37645(approx) akele hum.

    Jai Jharkhand! :)

    By Blogger Sayesha, at January 19, 2006 9:28 PM  

  • Ab next post decimals ke peeche dukhbhari daastan vyakt karegi!!!:)) :))-Ms.Happening!!!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at January 20, 2006 8:11 AM  

  • @Ms. Happening: Haha...I think the same...kya pataa chapaat ek lambi aur dukhbhari thesis likhe...decimals ki importance par...and he might end it like this: hass lo, hass lo...all "GREAT" ideas are always scoffed at in the beginning
    =))

    By Blogger The Girl Who Sold The World, at January 20, 2006 9:10 AM  

  • @the girl who sold the world:...ek min,ek lambi aur dukhbhari thesis nahi,1.09997262(approx.)lambi aur dukhbhari thesis..:)) :))-Ms.Happening!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at January 20, 2006 9:31 AM  

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